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Open Poetry #44

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Boshii2
Member

since 2009-02-01

Posts 146

0 posted 2009-02-19 02:14 AM

Like me it hid nothing
Past its useby date they'd say
Held together only by memories and yet it was enough.
No longer white.
Not new but better than new
Lacy texture,trying to imitate my face
my skin

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2009-02-19 02:19 AM

whoa...I feel sad here...no sure it was intended but this was good!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2009-02-19 02:29 AM

Yes, much better than new. Love this, Boshii.
Ida

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

3 posted 2009-02-19 02:31 AM

You're my favorite.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

mein or meree thanhai
Junior Member

since 2009-02-01

Posts 21

4 posted 2009-02-19 06:51 PM

somtimes words are not enough to tell what our mind feels. my words are not enough to tell you what i feel now.
boshi.... really i love your words

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2009-02-19 09:52 PM

Yo dear Boshii2,

I really like this little poem.

I'd put a period after "skin".

Love Bobby

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