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Hiding Under The Covers
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Hiding Under The Covers By: Noah Eaton 1/1/09 Learning to remember, not to be frightened, separate we come, separate we go, and this is all we know. I wear noble thoughts like badges, stitched into my chest, but tending to a blazing hearth, seems like a waste when I’m alone. Hiding under the covers, waiting for someone to answer, hiding under the covers, hoping to hear an invitation. People fulfill me, and drain me all the same, where I’m always left with something, I’m eager to share that goes unsaid. Because faces are just picture galleries, crowds don’t make company, but my self-possessiveness, incites poverty in my head. Hiding under the covers, waiting for someone to answer, hiding under the covers, hoping to hear an invitation. Hiding under the covers, waiting for someone to answer, hiding under the covers, hoping to hear an invitation. Regret for wasted time, is more wasted time, practicing muttering that to myself, until I lose my breath. Then I remember, it has also been said, when you can't figure out what to do, it's time to go back to bed. Hiding under the covers, waiting for someone to answer, hiding under the covers, hoping to hear an invitation. Hiding under the covers, waiting for someone to answer, hiding under the covers, hoping to hear an invitation. "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nice work Noah! I loved these lines... "Regret for wasted time, is more wasted time," Too true. Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"my self-possessiveness, incites poverty in my head" ...interesting...very interesting...very thought-provoking |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
People fulfill me, and drain me all the same, _______________ Because faces are just picture galleries, crowds don’t make company, _______________ wonderful wonderful lines here Noah... very much enjoyed.. Happy New Year my friend  RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Sweet sweet Noah how have you been my good friend? Your poetry always sounds so lyrical, are these poems/songs that you are writing, and do you play an instrument? Wonderful write as always! Richy  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - great write as always... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah! It's so great to have you back! Now I know where you've been! ~ You've been hiding under the covers! Well, I'm glad you've come out to pen and play! May this new year be a joyful one for you, my hide 'n seek friend!  Giving you a big, warm hug 'n a smiley face! Linda  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Regret for wasted time, is more wasted time, practicing muttering that to myself, until I lose my breath. How well I can relate! *S* Excellent work, my friend. *S* |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write Noah! ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
"separate we come, separate we go and this is all we know" i love it. |
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