Teen Poetry #1 |
Please read this and tell me what you guys thought of it is very important Thanxs |
krazidani16 New Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 7Hialeah,fl |
Friendship is a strange thing... We find ourselves telling each other the deepest details of our lives... things we don't even share with our families. But what is a friend? A confidant? A lover? A shoulder to cry on? An ear to listen? A heart to feel? A friend is all of these things and more. No matter where we met, no matter how long we've been together... I call you a friend. A word so small, yet so large in feeling, a word filled with emotion, a word overflowing with LOVE. Truly great things come in small packages. Once the package of friendship has been opened, it can never be closed. It is a constant book always waiting... waiting to be read... and enjoyed. We may have our disagreements... we may have our disappointments... we may argue... we may concern one another. Friendship is a unique bond that lasts through all tribulations. A part of each of us goes into our friendships... our humor... our experiences... our tears. Friendships are foundations... necessary for life... and love. Even though I don't speak to you all everyday... or even as often as I would like to... You have all crossed my path of life in one way or another... some of you I've only bumped into... some have walked a while with me. And some of you will continue to walk with me... but DON'T EVER THINK FOR A SECOND that since we aren't in constant contact... that I don't think of you all... because if it wasn't for coming across all of YOU... who knows? I would be a completely different person... and... well... I'm happy with how I've turned out so far. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I really like that poem..its rare that i actually find a happy poem that is good, but you've done it.....its just to bad i dont have friends like that..... "What have I become? My sweetest Friend? Everyone I know Goes away In the end" -Trent Reznor- |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I really like that poem..its rare that i actually find a happy poem that is good, but you've done it.....its just to bad i dont have friends like that..... "What have I become? My sweetest Friend? Everyone I know Goes away In the end" -Trent Reznor- |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
oops....hehehe replied twice |
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