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krazidani16
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since 1999-09-04
Posts 7
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0 posted 1999-09-18 01:35 PM


Friendship is a strange thing...
We find ourselves telling each
other the deepest details of
our lives...
things we don't even
share with our families.
But what is a friend? A confidant?
A lover? A shoulder to cry on?
An ear to listen? A heart to feel?
A friend is all of these things and more.
No matter where we met, no
matter how long we've been together...
I call you a friend.
A word so small, yet so large in feeling,
a word filled with emotion,
a word overflowing with LOVE.
Truly great things come in small packages.
Once the package of friendship has
been opened,
it can never be closed.
It is a constant book always waiting...
waiting to be read...
and enjoyed.
We may have our disagreements...
we may have our disappointments...
we may argue...
we may concern one another.
Friendship is a unique bond that
lasts through all tribulations.
A part of each of us goes into our
friendships...
our humor...
our experiences...
our tears.
Friendships are foundations...
necessary for life...
and love.
Even though I don't speak to you all
everyday...
or even as often as I
would like to...
You have all crossed my path
of life in one way or another...
some of you I've only bumped into...
some have walked a while with me.
And some of you will
continue to walk with me...
but DON'T EVER THINK FOR A SECOND
that since we aren't in constant
contact...
that I don't think of you all...
because if it wasn't
for coming across all of YOU...
who knows?
I would be a completely different person...
and...
well...
I'm happy with how I've turned
out so far.

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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-09-18 03:55 PM


I really like that poem..its rare that i actually find a happy poem that is good, but you've done it.....its just to bad i dont have friends like that.....

"What have I become?
My sweetest Friend?
Everyone I know
Goes away
In the end"
-Trent Reznor-

Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
2 posted 1999-09-18 03:55 PM


I really like that poem..its rare that i actually find a happy poem that is good, but you've done it.....its just to bad i dont have friends like that.....

"What have I become?
My sweetest Friend?
Everyone I know
Goes away
In the end"
-Trent Reznor-

Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
3 posted 1999-09-18 03:56 PM


oops....hehehe replied twice

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