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Taeira
Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26


0 posted 1999-09-17 01:20 AM


Just when i promised myself i'd never love again
You started it off with a simple 'hello'
and i fell deeper
and deeper
U returned me into that crazy world
and once again i remembered what it was like to be happy
what do u want?
i'm so confused
are your words of courtesy, or is there something more?
I hate the fact that you have the power to make me happy or sad
It is your words that change my day
So if there's nothing there
stop this now
If you're looks mean nothing
stop looking
Don't keep doing this to me because I don't know if i'm strong enough to go through this again


(This poem may not make sense to anyone but me!)



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~live life like there's no tomorrow, because regret is the ultimate punishment~

© Copyright 1999 Taeira - All Rights Reserved
Maitay
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA
1 posted 1999-09-17 11:43 AM


THis poem makes since to anyone who has ever been in love,or at least what we thought was love. BEst of luck.
Maitay

Taeira
Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26

2 posted 1999-09-17 11:46 AM


aww thankyou so much maitay!


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~live life like there's no tomorrow, because regret is the ultimate punishment~

LoveAngel2000
Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 11
Knoxville, Tenessee (home of the Inbreds)
3 posted 1999-09-17 01:39 PM


That poem is exactaly what I went through with my bf! That waz great!
StratMatt
Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87
Macomb, IL, U.S.A.
4 posted 1999-09-19 06:10 PM


I know exactly what you mean in this poem too.
It's a good and a bad thing to be in love so deeply where one person can totally affect you.
I know the feeling from my last relationship, my entire mood was generally based on how the relationship was going, if there was a problem, even the slightest one, dwelled upon, I could easily end up in tears.
The structure is interesting. I've never seen a poem quite in the structure this was put in.
Nice work Taeira.
-Matt

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"Lost time is never found again." -Ben Franklin.

Taeira
Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26

5 posted 1999-09-21 03:52 AM


thankyou Matt!
yeh i guess it is a different format..but it is as different as my thoughts coz i wrote exactly what came into my head..i didnt bother about ryhming or sentence structure or anything!

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