Teen Poetry #1 |
You're confusing me!!!!!! |
Taeira Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26 |
Just when i promised myself i'd never love again You started it off with a simple 'hello' and i fell deeper and deeper U returned me into that crazy world and once again i remembered what it was like to be happy what do u want? i'm so confused are your words of courtesy, or is there something more? I hate the fact that you have the power to make me happy or sad It is your words that change my day So if there's nothing there stop this now If you're looks mean nothing stop looking Don't keep doing this to me because I don't know if i'm strong enough to go through this again (This poem may not make sense to anyone but me!) ------------------ ~live life like there's no tomorrow, because regret is the ultimate punishment~ |
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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
THis poem makes since to anyone who has ever been in love,or at least what we thought was love. BEst of luck. Maitay |
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Taeira Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26 |
aww thankyou so much maitay! ------------------ ~live life like there's no tomorrow, because regret is the ultimate punishment~ |
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LoveAngel2000 Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 11Knoxville, Tenessee (home of the Inbreds) |
That poem is exactaly what I went through with my bf! That waz great! |
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StratMatt Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87Macomb, IL, U.S.A. |
I know exactly what you mean in this poem too. It's a good and a bad thing to be in love so deeply where one person can totally affect you. I know the feeling from my last relationship, my entire mood was generally based on how the relationship was going, if there was a problem, even the slightest one, dwelled upon, I could easily end up in tears. The structure is interesting. I've never seen a poem quite in the structure this was put in. Nice work Taeira. -Matt ------------------ "Lost time is never found again." -Ben Franklin. |
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Taeira Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26 |
thankyou Matt! yeh i guess it is a different format..but it is as different as my thoughts coz i wrote exactly what came into my head..i didnt bother about ryhming or sentence structure or anything! |
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