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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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0 posted 1999-09-13 10:28 PM


I cherish you Fall; you’re my love and my curse
I’m dying of thirst; my fatigue pays its toll
I beg you, don’t stall, order clouds to burst,
I will crawl to the puddles to fill up my soul

Here you stand on the edge, facing your fate
And the time will not wait, turning over the page
It will set off the change, not a second delayed,
Immature at your age you will vacate the stage

Drop by drop, leaf by leaf, you are closer to snow
I observe you in awe, with a great disbelief,
Not a wrinkle of grief even though you must go
And with less time to breathe only higher you heave

Only higher you rise in a whirlpool of leaves
While nature’s striptease attracts all the eyes
And you flee in disguise while nobody sees
Then you cease to exist slowly shrinking in size



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I fell in love and kept on falling

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 09-14-99).]

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Master
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1 posted 1999-09-14 10:22 PM


any comments?
Master
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2 posted 1999-09-19 01:09 PM


any1?
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