Teen Poetry #1 |
Just close your eyes... |
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Just close you eyes Our sight is limited in measure Get closer than skin And look for true pleasure Above the clouds Upon the moonlight street Not only hands But dreams will meet Our minds will touch And lose control Through time and space Our souls will whirl Into the silence of the night And rocking in a lazy motion The river of our love Will find an endless ocean And there Entangled in the summer heat Not only hands But dreams will meet Just close your eyes... ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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TrulY PreciouS Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20 |
That is nice!!! getting intimate with somone aye!! I'm pretty sure you like dit. anyways,, i enojyed it. good job!! ------------------ TrulĀ„ PreciouĀ§ "Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!" |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks, your comments are truly precious. ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Very nicely done. You write well...I enjoy your work. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanx Caroline! |
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