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krazidani16
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since 1999-09-04
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0 posted 1999-09-05 04:04 PM


My Love
By:Summer Riley

I love you with all my heart
Yet you don't know
I have loved for forever
Yet you can not see
Why?
I tell myself everday to tell
Yet I don't
And the day I did
You didn't care
Now you tell me care
Well I have moved on
You had your chance
And you lost it
I can not give you a nother
it is to late
I love another I have moved on
and now you must to
Because I love hime soo much
That I could not bear to hurt him

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beowulf_26
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since 1999-06-29
Posts 183

1 posted 1999-09-09 07:51 PM


Oh what a tangled web we weave. (I like saying that even though it isn't used in it's original context) I find it almost funny how we can be so strong in emotion and at the same time be fickle. Great job on the poem, it made me think.
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