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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania 
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Can someone tell me if I did this right, please? I love you more, than you could ever know Know you better than anyone at all All the guys mean nothing compared to you You are the one I love forever and longer Longer than eternity I will be your friend Friend, and a confidant, your partner in life Life is special and perfect with you here Here in my life you always need to stay Stay this way forever and do not change Change how you love me or the way you care Care for me in every way, like you always do Do make me happy, but do not make me sad Sad that you left me, I never hope to be Be the angel that guards me from all danger Danger from all evil, you keep me safe, Safe and protected, you care for me sweetly Sweetly perfect as you always will be Be mine for ever and always keep me happy Happy I found someone as special as you. ------------------ People who throw kisses are hopelessly lazy. -Bob Hope |
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HCwildchild Member
since 1999-09-03
Posts 55Pennsylvania,USA |
I liked your poem  Personally, I don't think there is a wrong way to write poetry, they are your feelings, and I think you should be able to express them any way you want to. It was cool, keep up the good work ------------------ Heather C. |
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