i needa know if hsould give this to my g/f or not,answer qwikly please

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i needa know if hsould give this to my g/f or not,answer qwikly please

The Mike Sacks
Member

since 1999-08-29

Posts 129
brooklyn ny

0 posted 1999-09-01 03:55 PM

Dear Joyce:

this is moving very quickly
yet this feelings still so good
i never felt this way b4
i never knew i could
if u knew all i see wen i look into your eyes
you'd know all i say is truth and none of it is lies

This feelings way to special
i think ur all i ever need
for u i would do anything
for you I'd die and bleed
if u only knew they way i feel wen in kiss u on our lips
wen all my fingers freeze and my body to all its tips

this is driving my heart wild
every second that IM with u
i jus that i should tell u
how i feel about u too

Mike Sacks Sept/1/99

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I wish i were a poet

Lil'Sweets
New Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 6
Port st. Lucie FL USA

1 posted 1999-09-01 04:58 PM

I'm not all a dat on poetry but, I'ma tell u dis much..u should mos def give it to your g/f! I think that is one of the sweetest poems I ever read!
Great job!!!!

Black Rain
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 60
California, USA

2 posted 1999-09-01 07:26 PM

Yes, give it to her. She would like it no matter what......but this is so sweet.

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"I'm just a girl...standing in front of a boy...asking him to love her." - Notting Hill

AngelFromHell15_99
New Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 3
Newport, ME. USA

3 posted 1999-09-01 08:10 PM

This is a GREAT poem, If I were you, I would give it to her, I wish my b/f would write me poetry!!!

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Heather L. Melanson

krazidani16
New Member

since 1999-09-04

Posts 7
Hialeah,fl

4 posted 1999-09-05 04:08 PM

I think You should Give it to her it is a really good poem and i would love it if my b/f felt inspired to write about me like that and i wish he could wruite the way he felt on paper. It is really good give it to her.

----------- Summer Riley

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