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Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-08-29 12:48 PM

The warmth of your breath still caresses my skin.
Your tender touch lingers within my blissful soul.
With an honest, loving look you've pulled me in.
Our fire is eternal, everlasting, this I know.

Your tender touch lingers within my blissful soul.
Hand in hand we shall softly tread the infinite skies.
Our fire is eternal, everlasting, this I know.
I am dancing upon the breeze as tears of joy I cry.

Hand in hand we shall softly tread the infinite skies.
Softly enfolded within your arms is where I belong.
I am dancing upon the breeze as tears of joy I cry.
Harmonious chords quietly sound love's enraptured song.

Softly enfolded within your arms is where I belong.
Within a sparkling, dreamy haze my drifting mind dwells.
Harmonious chords quietly sound love's enraptured song.
Consumed with overpowering emotion, my heart swells.

Within a sparkling, dreamy haze my drifting mind dwells.
I ache in anticipation for the moment our lips touch.
Consumed with overpowering emotion, my heart swells.
Until now, I didn't realize I could love this much.

I ache in anticipation for the moment our lips touch.
With an honest, loving look you've pulled me in.
Until now, I didn't realize I could love this much.
The warmth of your breath still caresses my skin.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-08-30 03:26 AM

Very, very well done! Complicated rhyme scheme and all.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Angel
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since 1999-07-02

Posts 551
Pennsylvania

2 posted 1999-08-30 11:50 AM

What can I say you have awed me once again

. I love this poem (I can really relate). I think I should stop writing and just respond, cuz this is truly amazing

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Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-08-30 08:46 PM

Thank you both very much!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller

Capulet[R+J]
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since 1999-08-07

Posts 41
Calgary,Alberta Canada

4 posted 1999-08-31 01:05 PM

Very beautiful

I truely enjoyed

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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..

Nuriphnos
Junior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 21
Philadelphia, PA USA

5 posted 1999-08-31 03:22 PM

That was such a profound poem Alwye. I really enjoy ur writing keep up the good work.

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