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Teen Poetry #1

Boredom--Please respond

Devin
Junior Member

since 1999-08-23

Posts 29
Oviedo,Fl, USA

0 posted 1999-08-26 08:38 PM

It fills my mind
And yet,
Nothing is there
It sweeps through
A sleepy little town
Like mine
A lazy summer day
Drifts by
Until night comes
And yet another
Dream haunts me

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Never lose hope, even the darkest nights have ends.

swan
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 58
california, usa

1 posted 1999-08-26 09:14 PM

wow! this one got me. it's so simple but yet, it says so much. i really like your writing style.
Swan

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"I can't go on like this is not a way of telling you'll be mine. Be mine. Like I was walking on your blue carpet. Or am I just being foolish? Or am I just being hopefully yours?" Stina Nordenstam

Devin
Junior Member

since 1999-08-23

Posts 29
Oviedo,Fl, USA

2 posted 1999-08-27 08:06 AM

Thanks.

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Never lose hope, even the darkest nights have ends.

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