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since 1999-08-18
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Front Royal, VA, USA

0 posted 1999-08-19 06:04 PM

My heart feels terrible pain,
At losing my best friend,
I now there will be no gain,
Even though this isn't the end.

I'm moving, she said,
Far Far Away,
This information I have been fed,
So why am I still acting happy and gay?

Finally the reality, the schock,
It's hit me like a ton of bricks,
I lose ability to talk,
My life is being sucked out of me by heartless tick.

I cry, I scream, I pray, I hope,
That it would not be real,
That'd it be a dream and I'd wake up laughing like a junkie on dope,
I wish to lose ability to feel.

We will write, call, visit,
We will see each other none the less,
But it's not the same as our old visits,
Remember this: My friend, you are the best!

Not one of my better ones...but it came from the depressed side of Sunflower's heart. *smiles* Oh least it's truthful. I hope none of you have to feel this pain.

Sita aka Sunflower

© Copyright 1999 Sunflower - All Rights Reserved
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-08-26 01:07 AM

Indeed a sad event, Sunflower. If this is true, then you have my sympathy. Great work.

*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller

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since 1999-08-24
Posts 8

2 posted 1999-08-26 01:31 AM

Great work Sunflower it was indeed a touching poem and a very sad one too. It brought out your innermost true feelings and passion.


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