|Teen Poetry #1|
since 1999-08-18Posts 14
Front Royal, VA, USA
My heart feels terrible pain,
At losing my best friend,
I now there will be no gain,
Even though this isn't the end.
I'm moving, she said,
Far Far Away,
This information I have been fed,
So why am I still acting happy and gay?
Finally the reality, the schock,
It's hit me like a ton of bricks,
I lose ability to talk,
My life is being sucked out of me by heartless tick.
I cry, I scream, I pray, I hope,
That it would not be real,
That'd it be a dream and I'd wake up laughing like a junkie on dope,
I wish to lose ability to feel.
We will write, call, visit,
We will see each other none the less,
But it's not the same as our old visits,
Remember this: My friend, you are the best!
Not one of my better ones...but it came from the depressed side of Sunflower's heart. *smiles* Oh well...at least it's truthful. I hope none of you have to feel this pain.
Sita aka Sunflower
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since 1999-06-16Posts 3850
In the space between moments
Indeed a sad event, Sunflower. If this is true, then you have my sympathy. Great work.
I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller
since 1999-08-24Posts 8
Great work Sunflower it was indeed a touching poem and a very sad one too. It brought out your innermost true feelings and passion.
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