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Teen Poetry #1

dont leave me

chollagrl4
Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-08-19 03:14 AM

I never thought I'd see the day,
when you'd want to say goodbye.
But on that night in your car,
you almost caused me to die.
You said its over,
but this I could not accept.
Whatever happened to the promise you kept?
To stay with me forever,
and never to let go.
but now my tears fall,
and my self-esteem is low.
I thought you loved me,
but you must have had hate it your heart.
I realize you never loved me,
not even from the start.
I wish I could live,
but now I must die.
cause you broke my heart it two,
and then you said goodbye.
Your left me crying,
with too much pain to bear.
without even a hug goodbye,
I know you do not care.

[This message has been edited by chollagrl4 (edited 08-19-99).]

mister61
Junior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 41
bergen county, nj

1 posted 1999-08-19 03:18 PM

Your feelings come through loud and clear in your poem. I know that whole situation really hurts, and I'm sorry. Keep writing about it, though. I hope it helps - hang in there.

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