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Teen Poetry #1

I'm searching for your touch...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-08-18 07:29 PM

Where every stranger is a friend
And every friend could be a stranger
Where world is hard to understand
And every shadow hides some danger
I’m searching for your touch
In silence I can hear you laughing
Where nothing means so much
And much means nothing
Where emptiness eats up the words
Yet mouths are in constant motion
Where walls absorb the thoughts
Where souls express emotions
Where some are bonded by their strength
And others crumble under pressure
Where distance has no length
And closeness has no measure
Where energy’s unbound
And friends are never far
Where love is passed around
And we are who we are

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

1 posted 1999-08-20 02:16 PM

I'd like to know what you think.

Nici
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 22
Hastings, New Zealand

2 posted 1999-08-21 08:31 AM

What can I say - Very deep and meaningful....
I like it!
Its all very true in our confused society but at the end of the day (as you say) "we are who we are!"
Good stuff mate!

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 1999-08-22 02:48 AM

Thanks for responding Nici!

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Dana
New Member

since 1999-08-22

Posts 4
Ny

4 posted 1999-08-22 03:55 AM

I love your poem. Now if i only had a talent like you. Well, what can i say. You seem to have a good grip on what life is. If I had half the understanding of what life is, that you have a would be happy..

jelliebabie
New Member

since 1999-08-22

Posts 3
Hong Kong

5 posted 1999-08-22 04:00 AM

beautiful

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

6 posted 1999-08-22 12:16 PM

Thanks everyone! and Dana life is simple, you just have to stop looking for its meaning and live.

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I fell in love and kept on falling

pen of passion
Member

since 1999-08-11

Posts 234

7 posted 1999-08-25 09:43 PM

Master, well-written. And I think you are right--experience life, in other words--go with the flow.

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