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NaTaLy
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since 1999-08-16
Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

0 posted 1999-08-18 12:00 PM


shes evil say the rumors.

she sit there alone in the dark in her room crying.
the demonds of the past haunt her day and night.

she remembers her first kiss and winces with anger.

no one is left to care for her.shes alone.she'd been exposed to all the bad things in this world and shes tired of living.

it wasnt her fault!
it was the devil disguised in the form of a best friend!

hatred fills every once of her.
she looks down at her cutt up wrists ans screams from pain.

she was the good child.

but when she thinks theres no hope and the light is about to go out for her, new hope arises.

but the scares of the past will always remain.

and thats why she always wear long sleeves.




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n.m.

© Copyright 1999 nataly mor - All Rights Reserved
Sunflower
Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 14
Front Royal, VA, USA
1 posted 1999-08-18 09:22 PM


Wow! This one really got me thinking...it got into my head when I first read it and now I can't get it out! I hope this doesn't come from experience...some pain that would be. I have had some rumors spread about me...I know they're not to nice. Keep writing!
NaTaLy
Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa
2 posted 1999-08-18 10:10 PM


sadly enough to say this is a true story.
DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-08-19 05:23 AM


Profound wisdom indeed. I feel the same at times, yet I help others out of that pit.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



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