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Carry Me |
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abra-cadabra Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 75Florissant, Missouri, USA |
Carry me away to an ocean shore Lay me down to be no more Open my heart, lick the sky Look in vein, knife in eye Love fear of death Blood lying on the hearth Carry me away to nothingness Inside my life not your carress Kill my love it's all I have The fault of mine, a massive quake There is some feeling you just can't shake Deserved what I got for you to see I have never cared for me Fear death of love Lightning striking from above ------------------ ~don't let your love pass you by....~ |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, a really good piece!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* |
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katrina Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 41White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A |
beautiful poem! ------------------ |
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Whau2251 Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 17Hanford,California,U.S.A. |
That's an extremely good poem..excellent! ------------------ *OoOoAudrey AuoOoO* "Music is my life,without it, I would not be alive." |
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