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Neverending pain
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Neverending pain |
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Ashlie693 Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 25 |
How can you act as if nothings wrong? We've been through so much, its been way too long My heart is just SICK, of loving so much And giving and giving,then loosing your touch My mind cant forget, about all of our days But it also can't forget, your neverending ways You tell me you love me, you tell me you care But then when you get "some", you suddenly aren't there I never get mad, but sometimes I cry I love you so much, but I cant understand WHY Why do you have, this GRIP so tight around me That I can't break looose, I can't get free The look on your face, Will have me coming back for years Despite how you hurt me And all of my tears |
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MEGAN Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 17Cottonwood, Ca United States |
I just wanted to say awesome poem..The way you expressed your feelings, is so real, and makes all of us face reality, at least it does for me.. I am going through exactly what your poem described, and i absolutley loved you poem.. great job! |
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