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Former DeadPoet
Junior Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 16

0 posted 1999-08-13 05:29 PM

My Definition Of Love

The definition of true love
Lies not within the words but in the heart
The definition of nostalgia
Is when two lovers are apart
All feelings have their definitions
But there’s one that no man could explain
The undisputed and eternal
Definition of true pain
To understand the meaning of this vile aspect
One first must love, but not be loved the same
One first must lose the love and in effect
One will indeed experience true pain
True pain is what you feel when your love
Is right before your eyes…
Smiling so true and looking up above
Into the eyes of someone you despise
True pain is always unexpected,
It’s always there until its dead
For days, months, years and even decades
Its food on which true hate is bred
In truth, true pain is not what brought me here
I suffer, yes, but it’s because of love
As great as it may seem to strangers
Love hurts, when pushers come to shove.

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Former DeadPoet
Junior Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 16

1 posted 1999-08-13 05:31 PM

Since my ex-gf (Tanya) posted some poetry, apparently about me and made me seem so wicked in the replies, I decided to post something myself. This will be the only work you will see from me. Just something for her to criticize and for you to enjoy.

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Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-07-02

Posts 551
Pennsylvania

2 posted 1999-08-13 06:04 PM

That was a really amazing poem. I don't think it is right for her to blame you for what happened (even though I don't know.) But this is a really great poem, you have lots of talent and you should continue to write.

Former DeadPoet
Junior Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 16

3 posted 1999-08-13 08:26 PM

Thank You Angel, I would guess that Tanya was just upset, thats why she framed me in the portait of a bad guy. Otherwise, she can't really blame me and I certainly dont blame her for anything, I just couldnt love her.

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Have a nice day and smile! =)

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

4 posted 1999-08-15 01:18 AM

I'm not a mean person ,but ty away from this site!!..if ur idea of poetry is revenge then i wish uu the most painfull death,i know tanya.....shes a beautiful talented young girl...and i hope u dont dare to critisize her

Mike Sacks

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I'm not a poet!!,E.A.Poe was a poet.
I'm jus a person who likes to show off his writnig to ppl...but i can never call my slef a poet...its a dream not reality

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