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Teen Poetry #1

Love me

CrAyZeD
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 45

0 posted 1999-08-11 12:20 PM

How come every good girl is taken,
but when their free I'm not?
How come I dream of her, but she doesn't dream of me?
Why is it when she looks at me my soul feels free?
My eyes tight shut and her words captivate me!
Why doesn't she feel that for me?
Why doesn't she reach for me? I'm so close yet so far.
Why doesn't she see she was ment for me.

CrAyZeD
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 45

1 posted 1999-08-12 11:16 AM

ThAnKs FoR tHe RePlY

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

2 posted 1999-08-12 12:21 PM

I can surely relate to this...it always seems that when you finally find someone you're really crazy about, it's as if they hardly notice you the same...great read - keep writing!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

CrAyZeD
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 45

3 posted 1999-08-17 11:08 PM

Dont reply all at once.
(sarcasm!)

Nici
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 22
Hastings, New Zealand

4 posted 1999-08-17 11:30 PM

WOW AGAIN!!!!!!
I know what you mean - I feel the same thing. The guys that I've liked have never felt the same way. Oh well, thats life!

I really like your poems - I'll watch out for more!

CrAyZeD
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 45

5 posted 1999-08-17 11:43 PM

Thanks a lot
i like that i have a loyal reader!

Devin
Junior Member

since 1999-08-23

Posts 29
Oviedo,Fl, USA

6 posted 1999-08-26 08:56 PM

I liked that and I can totally relate.

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Never lose hope, even the darkest nights have ends.

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