Teen Poetry #1 |
since our birth |
Addie Anne Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 46norman, oklahoma- usa |
we're crying since the day of birth time progresses our tolerance to the worlds pains and some are still crying, and some are still hiding, and some will never see the highs, and some will only live to die. we've been angry since the day of our birth time takes away the memories of what was felt but it's all still there and some are still fighting, and some are still lying, and some will never love, and some are dying for their love. we've been labled since the day of our birth names grow to be our identity and time worsens the degree of who and what we are and some find a place, and some are disgraced, and some will never fit, and some will finally trip. our lives have been charted for us, and disapointment is always at hand things don't always go the easy way things aren't always ment for the easy ways. crying since the day of our births and some are still hurting, some will never find a way, some are going to shoose their way, and some will never live to tell of their fate. |
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Capulet[R+J] Junior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 41Calgary,Alberta Canada |
I really enjoyed your poem. It not only covers what everyone feels or will feel, but reality. Keep on writing. ------------------ Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds.. |
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Addie Anne Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 46norman, oklahoma- usa |
thank you much! that means a lot to me. i'm in a crappy mood and it's nice to know i'm not failing at what i love to do. i liked your quote or whatever that was at the end. thanks again, addie |
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Sweet T Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 64mesa, arizona maricopa |
This is an award winner. Congradulations. lol.... Sweet T |
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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
I really liked this poem. It encompasses a lot of the human experience. very nicely expressed. |
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