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Addie Anne
Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 46
norman, oklahoma- usa

0 posted 1999-08-07 04:03 PM


we're crying since the day of birth
time progresses our tolerance to the worlds pains
and some are still crying,
and some are still hiding,
and some will never see the highs,
and some will only live to die.
we've been angry since the day of our birth
time takes away the memories of what was felt
but it's all still there
and some are still fighting,
and some are still lying,
and some will never love,
and some are dying for their love.
we've been labled since the day of our birth
names grow to be our identity
and time worsens the degree of who and what we are
and some find a place,
and some are disgraced,
and some will never fit,
and some will finally trip.
our lives have been charted for us,
and disapointment is always at hand
things don't always go the easy way
things aren't always ment for the easy ways.
crying since the day of our births
and some are still hurting,
some will never find a way,
some are going to shoose their way,
and some will never live to tell of their fate.

© Copyright 1999 Addie Anne - All Rights Reserved
Capulet[R+J]
Junior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 41
Calgary,Alberta Canada
1 posted 1999-08-07 05:37 PM


I really enjoyed your poem. It not only covers what everyone feels or will feel, but reality. Keep on writing.


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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..

Addie Anne
Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 46
norman, oklahoma- usa
2 posted 1999-08-07 10:16 PM


thank you much! that means a lot to me. i'm in a crappy mood and it's nice to know i'm not failing at what i love to do.
i liked your quote or whatever that was at the end.
thanks again,
addie

Sweet T
Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 64
mesa, arizona maricopa
3 posted 1999-08-09 06:51 PM


This is an award winner. Congradulations.
lol.... Sweet T

Rhiannon
Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95
Fayetteville, TN USA
4 posted 1999-08-09 07:12 PM


I really liked this poem. It encompasses a lot of the human experience. very nicely expressed.
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