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I've got this poem.. and i need a name for it.. care to suggest any?
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I've got this poem.. and i need a name for it.. care to suggest any? |
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SelenaSilver New Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 1Singapore |
Life goes on long even after the thrill of living it is gone. But you would still have to carry on. Because that was what you were meant to do, in this life that was given to you. You dont think of your past grievances nor dwell on any. You just move on, past all this. Past all this memories that have hurt you much. Past all those people who have betrayed your trust. Forget them if you must, but dont you forget... it was them who build up your life. You are thankful for the lessons they've taught you. You dont regret the pains they gave you. For these pains were only to make you stronger... And not to make the same mistakes.. over and over.. They've taught you how to love, how to give, how to miss... How to give without expecting much in return for the love that you shower on them. They've taught you the meaning of waiting in agony, of trusting and believing...in vain. For finally hating them, for all they did, for all the pains... You may thought you've been stupid to succumb to their lies... But believe me, after all this, it's them who's on the losing side.. For you know.. your're worth more than anything else beside... They are the ones to regret for passing you by.. You are who you make yourself to be You are the only one who can set yourself free. So break free from all your fears Do not be afraid to shed tears... |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I really liked this...a possible title for this would maybe be "Life". Something simple may work best for you...good luck! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy |
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unsimple New Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 3Fresno, California |
Really nice poem. I felt you had a real good idea with this. and about the name how about "thankful pain". |
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