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Starr_Scott
Junior Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 26
Brownwood, Texas, USA

0 posted 1999-08-06 04:09 PM


Sometimes when I'm too depressed
or drowning in self-doubt,
I know that I can call your name
and you will pull me out.

You taught me
that I'm worth much more
than what I'd always thought.
You gave me strength
and confidence
that so long I had sought.

You showed me that I'm beautiful
both outside and in.
You proved that i'm not second best
time and time again.

One day I will return to you
all you've given me.
I don't know in what time or form,
but I promise soon you'll see.

For richer, for poorer,
in sickness, in health,
through all of the thick and thin,
I trust I can always count on you
and am proud to call you friend


Starr_Scott

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Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
1 posted 1999-08-08 03:38 AM


This is one of the best poems I read in a long time. It reminds me of my best friend, Matt. He did the same thing for me. Keep up the good work .

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People who throw kisses are hopelessly lazy.
-Bob Hope


Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
2 posted 1999-08-08 03:40 AM


This is one of the best poems I read in a long time. It reminds me of my best friend, Matt. He did the same thing for me. Keep up the good work .

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People who throw kisses are hopelessly lazy.
-Bob Hope


dude
Junior Member
since 1999-08-05
Posts 16
wilkes-barre,pa.,luzeren
3 posted 1999-08-08 03:44 AM


I love this poem becaues it remindes me of my best friend, keep wrighting.
Dude

Starr_Scott
Junior Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 26
Brownwood, Texas, USA
4 posted 1999-08-09 04:52 PM


Thanks a bunch for the great feedback!
STARR

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Starr_Scott
Junior Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 26
Brownwood, Texas, USA
5 posted 1999-08-14 04:31 PM


I need more comments!
STARR

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