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Starr_Scott
Junior Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 26
Brownwood, Texas, USA

0 posted 1999-08-06 03:36 PM


A Tightness in my chest
and this yearning in my heart,
what your doing to me
is tearing me apart.
I wish that I
could show you,
tell you,
what you mean to me
but no matter what
I say or do
the truth
you'll never see
So what choices
can I make?
You just don't
understand.
I was meant
to be your woman,
but you'll never
be my man.


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Maitay
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA
1 posted 1999-08-06 09:01 PM


I loved it. So deep and totally to the point.Keep it up.


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~depression is not a sickness of the body or mind, but of the heart. When the heart feels alone and afraid~
Maitay Mirabel Litton

Mike1sacks
Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa
2 posted 1999-08-07 02:07 AM


that was so sweet if u were my woman i would shore be ur man
Starr_Scott
Junior Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 26
Brownwood, Texas, USA
3 posted 1999-08-09 04:49 PM


Thank's thats means alot to me that you liked it!
STARR

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