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MysticWizard
Junior Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 14


0 posted 1999-08-05 02:54 AM


When A Friend Is Sad
By Brad Boggs

What can you say,
To a friend when they're sad?
What can you say,
To keep them from feeling so bad?
All you can do,
Is be a shoulder or crying,
And to always be truthful,
Without ever lying.
You should always be there,
Without faults, without blame.
To get rid of the bad things,
And make them feel no shame.
You should only be there,
To give them your love.
You should never be there,
To criticize or judge.


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Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
1 posted 1999-08-05 01:10 PM


That is a really great poem. It is so right. I really liked it. Keep up the good work.

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People who throw kisses are hopelessly lazy.
-Bob Hope


Blind Love
New Member
since 1999-08-05
Posts 1
California, USA
2 posted 1999-08-05 03:12 PM


This was a very good poem, I always wished my friends were there for me, but lately I've just been getting dissapointed. Anyways, Great Poem.
black rain

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"Each of us are angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other." - Luciano de Crescenzo

Black Rain
Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60
California, USA
3 posted 1999-08-05 03:15 PM


OOPS! sorry I thought I was on my other name! If you even noticed, I signed a name other than the name I was on......or I might just be confusing you......I'm confusing myself.
black rain

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"I'm just a girl...standing in front of a boy...asking him to love her." - Notting Hill

earthangel
Junior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 10

4 posted 1999-08-05 04:43 PM


your poem is the kind that i would send to my best friend if he was ever down...thanks!!
Psycodillica
Junior Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 28
Lapeer,Mi,USA
5 posted 1999-08-05 09:08 PM


I like your poem. It is very right but people even friends sre quick to judge. It is some thing I try my hardest not to do.
Good work
Psycodillica
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"Judge I shall not,for I am nothing more than a mortal"

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