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ILoveJ
Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 16
Eugene, Or, US

0 posted 1999-08-03 10:41 PM


I saw you and you saw me.
We looked and lusted for each other.
Then we acted as if we were friends.
Not knowing of the consequences that day would bring.
We talked about our past loves and it brought us close.
I went with you home one day and got to know your inner-self.
You told me all your sorrows and I told you mine.
Everyday brought us closer and closer to a night of passion.
I went home everyday wanting only to see your face just once more.
I couldn't bear the pain of one weekend so I went to your house.
You anwsered the door with a smile and asked what's wrong.
You said let's talk in the basement where we can be alone.
I followed you there.
We talked about how we missed our old loves and then you kissed me.
I can't forget the way it felt, your lips so soft and warm against my cold and frighten cheek.
You laid me down and caressed my skin with your masculine hands.
You undressed me so many times with your eyes that you knew just how to do it.
I held your warm body to mine.
You made me feel so wonderful.
I couldn't say a word.
Then you told me never to tell what we had done.
You said it would ruin our love.
The very next day I asked you how you felt.
You asked how do I feel about what?
I said about the fact we had sex.
You had no idea what I was talking about.
I knew then it was nothing but lust and nothing out of love.

[This message has been edited by ILoveJ (edited 08-03-99).]

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Slim Shady
Junior Member
since 1999-08-03
Posts 32
Phoenix, AZ, USA
1 posted 1999-08-03 10:46 PM


Nice poem, is it true?

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"That's Rock Bottom
When this life makes you mad enough to kill...
That's Rock Bottom
When you want something bad enough you'll steal...
That's Rock Bottom
When you feel you have had it up to here
Cause you mad enough to scream but you sad enough to tear"

Words by the Slim Shady


ILoveJ
Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 16
Eugene, Or, US
2 posted 1999-08-03 10:51 PM


It's true. Sorry to say but I guess that's what I get for jumping in the sack with a guy I don't really know.
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