navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #1 » Empty Tears
Teen Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic Empty Tears Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
ToxicTears
New Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 2
Red Deer, Alberta, Canada

0 posted 1999-07-30 11:16 PM


These falling tears are empty
They just never want to end
Only you don't seem to see
You've become blind my friend
So you won't hold me close
You just push me away
But when I turn to another
You ask me to stay?
I can't continue here
With a waterfall of tears
They're leaving me empty
Except for my fears
Friendship is forever
But I thought love was too
So it all must be lies
Because of what I feel for you

© Copyright 1999 ToxicTears - All Rights Reserved
Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA
1 posted 1999-07-31 01:08 AM


Very nice...but sad. i hope everything works out for you.
<333Tanya<333

doritos
Junior Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 21

2 posted 1999-07-31 04:40 AM


happiness is always required in poems to make it really

nice

, you defied that. keep up the great work!

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #1 » Empty Tears

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary