Teen Poetry #1 |
Empty Tears |
ToxicTears New Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 2Red Deer, Alberta, Canada |
These falling tears are empty They just never want to end Only you don't seem to see You've become blind my friend So you won't hold me close You just push me away But when I turn to another You ask me to stay? I can't continue here With a waterfall of tears They're leaving me empty Except for my fears Friendship is forever But I thought love was too So it all must be lies Because of what I feel for you |
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Tanya Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Very nice...but sad. i hope everything works out for you. <333Tanya<333 |
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doritos Junior Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 21 |
happiness is always required in poems to make it really nice, you defied that. keep up the great work! |
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