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Teen Poetry #1

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JellyBean
Junior Member

since 1999-07-29

Posts 24
Durham, CA 95938

0 posted 1999-07-29 04:43 PM

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To my sweet,
all the things I never said.
All those little things,
that filled my heart with dread.
I was never able to tell you,
all the emotions that I felt.
All the feelings that I held inside,
those with which I had dealt.
The longing on those cold nights,
to have your arms around me tight.
And to see your tender eyes,
the ones I love and are my prize.
The kiss from your gentle lips,
oh, the thing I made myself miss!
Your loving caress, ...
I swear I tried my best.
Those words I could not form,
those words I keep with such regret,
still linger in my throat
simply unable to form,
but I don’t fret.
I know that somewhere,
somewhere deep inside,
my heart has met with yours,
and they cling together with uttermost pride.

Sweet T
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 64
mesa, arizona maricopa

1 posted 1999-07-29 06:31 PM

Very well written. Keep up the fantastic work.

JellyBean
Junior Member

since 1999-07-29

Posts 24
Durham, CA 95938

2 posted 1999-07-30 10:40 AM

Thanks, Sweet T.

nicnac8
Junior Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA

3 posted 1999-07-31 03:58 AM

i really enjoyed this poem because it was will written and it reminds me of myself. I never told my X-boyfriend how much i really cared for him , I was too afraid that he didn't feel the same way. If ur still with this person i'd advise u to tell him how u feel b4 it's too late.
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Nika

JellyBean
Junior Member

since 1999-07-29

Posts 24
Durham, CA 95938

4 posted 1999-07-31 09:28 PM

Thanx 4 your advice Nika. I'll follow.

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