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katrina
Junior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 41
White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A

0 posted 1999-06-21 04:24 PM

Untouched

Remained over the years secretly untouched
crept around her boyfriend
let being naïve stay In place.
She was comfortable with her identity
he respected her for her pace.
They were looking for love
and sex wasn’t there,
they didn’t have to do the deed to know thy truly cared.
They were the couple of the year
loved each other so much
That everyone else would disappear
And melted with each kiss and touch.
A drunk night at a party
Just one night for some fun
she lost her identity somewhere in that liquid drug.
Ended up in a room with a boy who wasn’t her one true love,
his sickly mind ruined her heaven above.
It wasn’t done in satin
But in a room full of dust
and all though she didn’t want to
The nasty boy said she must.
When it was over she ran out and screamed
her virginity had been taken before she was even sixteen.
She sobbed to her boyfriend
told her story with a weep,
And when she was done
all he wanted to do was kill that creep.
Her thoughts are like fire now
filled with glory and pain,
Winter came and went and now she crys in the rain.
Summer is coming soon
And now she is sweet sixteen,
she has a baby on the way
From the man who pulled her to her knees.
She is left to heal, support a child, and wait
For a second chance
That she never will take.
Picture perfect was scrapped in an instant
And now she is left to stand,
not untouched anymore
simply because of that twisted man.

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Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-06-21 09:50 PM

Wow, very powerful. Very sad. And a great job!

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*Krista Knutson*

Raven
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

2 posted 1999-06-22 12:19 PM

This poem made me get a sickly feeling in my stomache, it's so sad, and it reminds me of stories I've read, it's very good though

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