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Teen Poetry #1

it ain't easy

angeleyez16
New Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 2
fal. ma. usa

0 posted 1999-07-28 09:15 AM

you say you ain't the guy that be messin with my mind
so you don't gotta lie
when you look me in the eye

and i don't understand.
when your tryin to hold my hand

when you know you gotta girl
still you playin in my world

but what i'm tryin to say
is with you i wanna lay
but with your girl is where you stay
yet me and you still play

babe you know i want you
and to your girl you ain't true

this all be stressin me
figuring this out ain't easy

Maitay
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

1 posted 1999-07-28 05:36 PM

I've been in your shoes before. Me and my ex never got over each other and still are really good friends. But while he was going out with this other girl who was really nice we messed around. I felt so bad cause some how I think she new. We weren't only hurting her, but also me and my pride. I regret it, she did nothing to me, but I hurt her more then she deserved. I'm glad that in your writing you let him know what he was doing, I was too afriad to. I thought I would lose him. You are a talented writer, keep it up.

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~depression is not a sickness of the body or mind, but of the heart. When the heart feels alone and afraid~

nikki1421
Junior Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 15

2 posted 1999-07-28 10:34 PM

Nice Job! Keep in touch after school!
Nicole

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