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Olga
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since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-07-27 12:44 PM


I don't want a teddy bear,
I don'r want a diomand ring to wear.
All I want is you baby.

You make my heart sore,
You make my life so much more.
Baby baby cand you see?
All I want is you honee.

I don't want excuses,
And don't apologize.
Maybe its time that you relize.
Cuase I am yours and I want you to be mine.

How can you not see?
Witout you there is no me.
If you ever go away,
My life will never be the same.
Baby, baby honeepoom,
All I want is you baby.

© Copyright 1999 Olga - All Rights Reserved
mike2sacks
Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 18
brooklyn ny
1 posted 1999-07-29 08:30 AM


can i please sned this to my girlfrined?
Veronna
New Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 2
Brooklyn, NY, USA
2 posted 1999-07-31 11:27 PM


sure no prob. She must be something really special! ye go ahead
Olga
Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
3 posted 1999-07-31 11:28 PM


sorry about that, that was my otha usr name.
Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA
4 posted 1999-08-01 08:08 AM


Awwwwwwwwwwwww That was mad sweet!!!!
I liked it a lot. I think you did a great job in this poem, the rest of your poems too.
<333Tanya<333

Olga
Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
5 posted 1999-08-01 09:03 PM


thanx, u 2
Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
6 posted 1999-08-01 09:59 PM


I love that poem so much. It reminds me of my boyfriend. Thank you. I love to read your work so keep writing and I'll keep reading. You really have talent .
Olga
Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
7 posted 1999-08-02 08:20 PM


thank you angel
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