Teen Poetry #1 |
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My So-Called Life |
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*~*butterfly*~* Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 28minnesota |
My so-called boyfriend, such a worthless and arogant a**hole you are. why did i sit there and let you rip every caring and loving piece of my heart and soul away from me, how will i ever learn to trust anyone again. My so-called best friend, such a self-centered and fake snob you are. you left me hanging onto the edge when i was struggling with my life, how will i ever learn to forgive and forget. My so-called guy friends, none of you with a heart or a mind or your own. you guys believed every word he fed you and of course you STILL follow in his footsteps, man i do miss you guys, though. Why am i still sitting here letting my life fly by, when i know my so-called true love is out there. i guess i just feel so torn and worthless since you destroyed me. how can i learn to live again. Why am i still sitting here letting the time pass by, when i know my so-called true friends are out there. i guess i just feel so betrayed and foolish. how will i ever learn to trust you people, i can't go on like this. I guess i will just do what i do best, suck it up and live my life. you know it is really hard to live the pretend/happy life. i guess you could say its my SO-CALLED life. ------------------ *~*butterfly*~* |
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deannamarie Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43WI |
What happened? |
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Addie Anne Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 46norman, oklahoma- usa |
that was really good. it reminds me of a bunch of people i know. my now X boyfriend stole everything from me. i gave it to him actually, but he didn't return anything back. now he's with someone else and having the time of his life. keep wrighting because it is our only chance to be heard. with all hopes for the futuer to come, addie |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Good job! ![]() ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe |
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nicnac8 Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46New York, N.Y. USA |
I can definitely relate. it seems like every1 u trust sh!%s on you. Your only true friend are the ones who stick by u thick and thin. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I can definitely understand this one. It expresses your feelings well. Thank you, my dear. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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mike2sacks Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 18brooklyn ny |
Butterfly I love this work but im nto sure im happy read this b/c now u have me dying of curiosity onto wat hapened that gave u this reaction...please share.... ![]() Mikesacks ------------------ |
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*~*butterfly*~* Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 28minnesota |
thank you guys for responding to my poem, it means a lot! ![]() thanks for listening, i appreciate your guys' responses, & i hope you write me back! ![]() *later* ~kas~ |
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*~*butterfly*~* Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 28minnesota |
geese i didn't think i wrote THAT much!!! lol* |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I feel for you, butterfly. Keep on writing, its the only way some of us can deal with our pain. Thank you for sharing this piece. It is very good. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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