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Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

0 posted 1999-07-24 05:07 AM

One from past or one from present
But both+ are one
Together at last joined at seems
Together having fun
But not able to forget his dreams
In the war that they have won

He must decide
Now that they have died
The candle brakes
As the floor shakes
Opening doors
And shutting lights
Knowing all
That he must do tonight

The window shuts, as thoughts run through
Still deciding what he’s to do
No time to think?
No time to go
No time to listen
No time to know

Every night he’ll cry in bed
Only wishing he were dead

Of what he lost,
but what he has
can be better
no matter cost
he will try
not to die
but to live
as he wins, not to lose
as he thinks, not to choose

he acts as if nothings wrong
to start it off,but nothing long
now hes started something new
nothing left for him to do
but live it all and live it large
doing watever and takinig charge

MiKe SaCkS

Jan,1,99

I Shed A Tear for My People

Close your eyes,
As I kiss the world goodbye.
We are survival challenged,
In a world that wants us to die.
They attacked without warning,
Not letting a soul live on.
Fighting forever,
Until ever Jew is gone.

M.Sacks
2/2/99

What Color is Blood

Do I die because I'm black or white?
Do I live because I choose to fight?
Blood drenches the floors of race.
Lives vanished without a voice's trace.
This war we fight against ourselves.
Killing our civilization.
We still live with lies in complication.
All we determine is the color of blood!

M.Sacks
2/3/99

My Life is Death

I lie here down to sleep,
Because I am a Jew
Locked up behind these walls,
As my nightmares come to truth.
I lie here and I watch
The sun set before my eyes,
Thinking,all my people slain, yet I am still alive.
Should I be happy for my life?
Or sad for all their deaths?
That is all that I can think
As the sun sets upon the West.

M.Sacks
3/6/99

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Ashley Lawrence
Junior Member

since 1999-07-21

Posts 13
Bloomindale, IL US

1 posted 1999-07-24 08:01 PM

Yo i really like your poems!

You put everything just as it is. I like your style, keep writting.

Princess Lily
Member

since 1999-07-13

Posts 149
USA

2 posted 1999-07-29 01:20 AM

Love your poems.Keep up the good work.

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

*A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive*

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

3 posted 1999-08-01 04:54 AM

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Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

4 posted 1999-08-06 04:22 PM

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Starr_Scott
Junior Member

since 1999-08-06

Posts 26
Brownwood, Texas, USA

5 posted 1999-08-06 04:50 PM

I love the poems but their kinda depressing
Can't you add some color or adventure.....or something to liven them up a bit???
You have talent I have to give ya that
Ok well good work and keep it up.

Starr

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Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

6 posted 1999-08-11 04:55 AM

freax

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

7 posted 1999-08-15 12:31 PM

I have read some of your work and it is great. I hope that I can develope a talent like yours someday.

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