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Teen Poetry #1

Falling For You

Ashley2405
Junior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 28
West Columbia, South Carolina 29170

0 posted 1999-07-22 12:49 PM

You've showed me nothing but respect
In this time that we've been together
I've never met any other
Who knows like you know how to treat me, ever.

You asked if our lips could touch
And a smile spread across my face
And until this very moment
This smile cannot be erased.

I have never met anyone like you
You're the perfect guy for me
I hope we never grow apart
For my love for you is becoming deep.

So please, love, never leave me
That is the biggest fear I'll ever have to face
Because I will stay with you forever
There is no one who could EVER take your place.

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*})i({*Ash*})i({*

Jimmy
Junior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 42
Oak Grove

1 posted 1999-07-22 01:49 AM

That was a wonderful poem. You showed a lot of emotions through the whole thing.
It was a very touching form of saying I love you. Keep up the good work.
Remember: The one and only time to say "I Love You"
Is only when you know it's true.
-Jimmy-

Nuriphnos
Junior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 21
Philadelphia, PA USA

2 posted 1999-07-23 05:19 AM

That was great Ash!, u complety explained urself very clearly. Great poem, i liked the flow! Keep up the good work!

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