Why? (sorry if i used some1 else's title)

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Why? (sorry if i used some1 else's title)

Ashley2405
Junior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 28
West Columbia, South Carolina 29170

0 posted 1999-07-22 12:32 PM

Why is the world so full of hate?
Why do I care when it's just too late?
Why does anything I say come crashing down on me, times three?
Why doesn't anyone listen to me?
Why does anyone care anymore?
Why? It's just too late, we've all closed that door.
Why don't we all care about eachother?
Why don't we treat our neighbors like brothers?
Why don't we listen to everyone's rights?
Why? Because all we see is our own fights.
Why do we make big deals of petty things?
Why don't we fix the problems with the stings?
Why are we so preoccupied with what the future says?
Why? We can't even fix what the present unviels.
Why don't we all just try to care?
It might make our world a little easier to bare.
Until that day why not just try to get along
And try to choose the right from the wrong.

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Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-07-22 01:06 AM

This is kind of like my poem thats posted here called "Why is it?". I like this, its well written. Keep up the good work!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

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