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DoeEyes
Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 15
Florida

0 posted 1999-06-20 07:29 PM


I love you more than words can say,
More and more, day by day.
You mean more to me than you ever could know.
And every minute my love for you grows.
When I look into your eyes,
So blue like the sea,
My heart fills with love,
My mind with mystery.
I want to know your every thought.
To understand your mind,
And to be in your heart.
There's no way for us to know
How far this thing may go,
But for as long as I can see,
You are right there with me.
Being with you feels right,
I could love you day and night.
Before you I never felt
This kind of passion for anyone else.
It's so hard to describe,
But I've just got to try.
To love someone,
And know they love you back
Is such a wonderful feeling that I'd die if I were to lack
I'll never forget that while
As we look into each other's eyes
You smile.
To just be with you,
Doing anything at all,
Is so perfect to me,
So perfect that I recall
How special you make me feel,
How when I say I love you,
I mean I always will.
You truly are the guy of my dreams,
The one I've waited for
To tell all these things.
, I love you
What more can I say?
I love you < >
Happy Birthday!

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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN
1 posted 1999-06-20 09:39 PM


Wow, exquisitely written poem! Love sure is wonderous isn't it?
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