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since 1999-07-18
Posts 18

0 posted 1999-07-21 03:32 PM

I've missed your little
colourful kisses,
They mean so much,
they fullfill all my wishes.

I've missed the gentle,
grace of your hand,
It falls onto me
and caresses like no other can.

I've missed getting lost
in your crystal coloured eyes,
We can have a conversation
and forget the goodbyes.

I've missed the detailed
silohette of your full red lips,
Oh how they touch my soul,
softly refreshing, as the rain drips.

I've missed the ever-so-light
breath from your nose,
The air I feel flow across my neck,
is as beautiful as a rose.

I've missed the pulsating sound
of your hearing your heart,
As i lay on your chest,
I heard a dream begin to start.

I've missed feeling the intensity
of your voice,
Almost always sweet,
and as romantic as a sleek rolls royce.

i've missed you already,
your heart and soul too,
Yet you've only been gone an hour,
what will i write when its become two?

- jh -
- missing you -

* s.w.e.e.t.s *

[This message has been edited by jjsweets (edited 07-21-99).]

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New Member
since 1999-07-21
Posts 5
albion, MI, 49224
1 posted 1999-07-21 10:37 PM

This is an excellent piece, I can tell you really put a lot of thought and soul into it!
great job, keep it up!

*S i l v e r*
- MÞÞN -

since 1999-07-19
Posts 55
Danville Va. 24540
2 posted 1999-07-21 11:53 PM

no problemo sharing a title with this good poem

"And the day came, where the risk to remain tight in a bud, was more painful than the risk it took to blossom"

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