Teen Poetry #1 |
I Miss everything about you |
Black Rain Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60California, USA |
I miss the way you looked at me, I miss the twinkle in your eye. I miss the way you comforted me, now all I do is cry. I miss the way you carried yourself, so confident and brave. I miss the way you talked to me, you made me your love slave. I miss everything about you, I miss hearing your sweet name. When I think of how things were, I wish things were the same. ------------------ "Each of us are angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other." - Luciano de Crescenzo |
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Danleigh3 New Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 5florida/ny |
I have noticed that some people in here despise rhyming poems. They find them to be childish and boring. But some of the best poets rhymed. I liked your poem alot- It was short, totally detailed, and emotion filled. So keep up the good work! --------------------------------------------- {{{******0\/0\/0\/Danielle\/0\/0\/0******}}} --------------------------------------------- [This message has been edited by Danleigh3 (edited 07-21-99).] |
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Black Rain Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60California, USA |
Thanks for the reply, although I'm thankful for your comments, i don't mind if others don't like some rhyming poems, its just a place where i can clear my mind, and get my feelings out. Black rain |
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VelvetLuna Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 10Canada |
Great poem..its so sweet! |
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Acid Angel Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 17Austin, TX, US |
you took the words out of my mouth..this poem is so good along with your others.. i can always relate. I love it. "Love cant be doubted, or fake, but it can be missed." *Acid Angel |
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Tanya Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43Brooklyn, NY, USA |
wow that was really nice i was actually thinking about someone i really liked a lot and recently lost and its exactly how i feel <333Tanya<333 |
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V-dog New Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 9Farmville,NC,USA |
very nice poem.i wish i was half as good as you. |
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