Teen Poetry #1 |
I'm Sure That Jesus Was There When Ronnie Was Dying |
Mina New Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 4Ames, IA. 50010 |
I'm sure Jesus was there when Ronnie was dying. I'm sure if you would have looked, you would have seen Him crying. He saw Ronnies pain and fear. If only Ronnie would have trusted Jesus. He would have move the mountain. And solutions would have be made clear. I'm sure Jesus took Ronnie to the promised land. Where no pain or problem can never make a demand. Yes, Jesus was there and this you can be sure. His promise for all, is never to leave. Even when our problems won't let us believe. Because only His love is pure. |
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jjsweets Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 18albion,MI,usa |
this just blew me away!! you are so right and and you did an excellent way of showing it! this was really an awesome poem! |
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Mike1sacks Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103Bklyn ny,usa |
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Ashley Lawrence Junior Member
since 1999-07-21
Posts 13Bloomindale, IL US |
I know He was there, and that He was there waitting for him. As my great grandmother was dying, she saw Him standing in the corner, waitting for her. She told this to my aunt who was in the room at that same time and she scared my aunt and my Great Grandma said that is was her time to go, so see Daddy. And with that she died. ------------------ ^i^ ~ashley~ ^i^ |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
interesting... /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
very nice...truly Jesus is aalways there.. even when we are in pain and don't want to trust him. |
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broken627 Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66Eugene Oregon |
this is a beautiful poem it totally moved me!thank you!:-) |
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music_is_my_soul Junior Member
since 2007-04-07
Posts 18MA, USA |
I'm totally moved by this. It really affects me since my grandma just dies, and I was the only one in the room with her when she went. *cry* I'm the kind-a human wrecakge that ya love! |
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starpower Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 82Utah |
Good words |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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