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Mina
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since 1999-07-18
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Ames, IA. 50010

0 posted 1999-07-20 12:35 PM


I'm sure Jesus was there when Ronnie was dying.

I'm sure if you would have looked, you would have seen Him crying.

He saw Ronnies pain and fear.
If only Ronnie would have trusted Jesus. He would have move the mountain.
And solutions would have be made clear.

I'm sure Jesus took Ronnie to the promised land. Where no pain or problem can never make a demand.

Yes, Jesus was there and this you can be sure.
His promise for all, is never to leave.
Even when our problems won't let us believe.
Because only His love is pure.

© Copyright 1999 Mina - All Rights Reserved
jjsweets
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since 1999-07-18
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albion,MI,usa
1 posted 1999-07-20 01:41 PM


this just blew me away!! you are so right and and you did an excellent way of showing it! this was really an awesome poem!


Mike1sacks
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since 1999-07-24
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Bklyn ny,usa
2 posted 1999-07-25 01:15 AM



Ashley Lawrence
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since 1999-07-21
Posts 13
Bloomindale, IL US
3 posted 1999-07-25 04:17 PM




I know He was there, and that He was there waitting for him. As my great grandmother was dying, she saw Him standing in the corner, waitting for her. She told this to my aunt who was in the room at that same time and she scared my aunt and my Great Grandma said that is was her time to go, so see Daddy. And with that she died.

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^i^
~ashley~
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quietlydying
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the wonderful land of oz
4 posted 2002-11-01 03:17 AM


interesting...

/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

Star T
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 182
Philadelphia, US
5 posted 2003-01-30 11:05 PM


very nice...truly Jesus is aalways there.. even when we are in pain and don't want to trust him.

broken627
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since 2003-11-26
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Eugene Oregon
6 posted 2003-11-27 03:27 PM


this is a beautiful  poem it totally moved me!thank you!:-)
music_is_my_soul
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since 2007-04-07
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MA, USA
7 posted 2007-04-07 11:05 AM


I'm totally moved by this. It really affects me since my grandma just dies, and I was the only one in the room with her when she went. *cry*

I'm the kind-a human wrecakge that ya love!
~Gerard Way

starpower
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since 2007-04-10
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Utah
8 posted 2007-04-12 06:44 PM


Good words
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2007-11-13 07:55 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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