Teen Poetry #1 |
Why Does Love Hurt So Bad? |
Jimmy Junior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 42Oak Grove |
Why does love hurt so bad, Thinking about what I could have had. Knowing I have lost my first love for good, It's something I messed up, no one else could I never realized how much she meant till it had all gone, Now I just sit here in my room, feeling all alone. There are no words to get her to come back to me, For her I would go as far as swim across the sea. There is only one person that can help me out. My Love, it's you with out a doubt. I can comprehend when you say to me you lost all your love, To me your like an angel, sent from above. Some people will say it's better to have loved and lost, But me, I would take back the losing above all cost. There is only one thing I have gained from this, Think before doing or else you will miss. You will forever regret the things you have done, Your day will turn dark, like you have lost your sun. So when ever you get the chance to do something right, Do it for her, your love, with all your might. |
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neunagirl New Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 7Belton, MO U.S.A. |
I love this! I just said good-bye to my first love and it hurts so much. This poem really touched me. |
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Rita Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 55Danville Va. 24540 |
this really brings back the first time I fell in love......your words said it all...it is so hard to say good-bye...really liked it |
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Ashley Lawrence Junior Member
since 1999-07-21
Posts 13Bloomindale, IL US |
WOW! You took the words right out of my mouth! I love this guy (Mitch) w/ all my heart. I would wonder why he would chose me to fall in love w/. Then 6 onths later. He went out w/ one of my best friends! I thought that I would never love again! But I do! I love this guy Ryan who is 3 years older than me but hey! Life goes on. Soon it will pass. I thought that I would always be w/ Mitch but, as you never say never, never say always, always doesn't last forever. ------------------ ^i^ ~ashley~ ^i^ |
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Black Rain Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60California, USA |
I love this poem, I'm trying to get over this guy right now, the first guy i have actually loved with all of my heart. you really brought out the true aspects of life and love. good job. black rain |
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ILoveJ Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 16Eugene, Or, US |
This is a great poem. About two months ago my father interfered with a relationship I had, and my fiancee and I split up. The reason I didn't know.I only knew what my father told me.I never even said a word to my fiancee. My father told me that Jeff had called and said he wanted nothing more to do with me. This broke my heart and I didn't know what I would say to him so I never called him. Now two months later I was going through my stuff and I found his phone number. I wasn't sure if I should call so I waited till I could face him and when I was him I wanted to die. I called later that night and ended up talking to his mother she told me that my father had lied and that Jeff still loved me. I saw him the next day. Now we are back together and will be forever. [This message has been edited by ILoveJ (edited 07-22-99).] |
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Acid Angel Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 17Austin, TX, US |
This poem totally takes the words out of my mouth, im getting over my first love and his name is Jimmy to..i really miss him and hope we can get back together..i know how you feel and everyone else who wrote on this page. I love this poem. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful and sad. Another fine piece of work. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter |
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Aprender Junior Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 40Rohill, NJ, USA |
wow....this was great!!! Keep up the good work!!! |
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Tanya Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43Brooklyn, NY, USA |
I think the poem was very sweet I liked it a lot |
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Tanya Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43Brooklyn, NY, USA |
I think the poem was very sweet I liked it a lot |
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V-dog New Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 9Farmville,NC,USA |
what a great poem. really heartfelt words. |
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