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heaven_0401
Junior Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 19
Australia

0 posted 1999-07-19 03:56 AM


The sky shimmers
on the sparkling stars
Lying in your arms
Paralyzed
Moved by the lust inside your eyes

The beat of your heart
beats with mine
together as one
Til the end of time
.....................................
post what you think

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murf1_00
Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 20

1 posted 1999-07-19 03:58 AM


Its short but sweet and captures the feeling. Keep postin your work. You have talent.
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