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Mya15
Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 16
Sunrise,Fl,33351

0 posted 1999-07-19 01:28 AM


Forget his face, forget his kiss,
For get his touch, it won't be missed
Forget the time you were together
You know now it won't last forever
Forget how he always made you glad
Remember now, you're the girl he once had
Forget his gentle, teasing way
Remember you didn't like that anyway
Forget the way he spoke your name
Remember now, things aren't the same
Forget that he said your love love was for sure
Remember now that he's loving her
Forget how the time flew by so fast
Remember it's over now, it's in the past
Forget that he said it was you he treasured
Remember now, he's gone forever
Forget his beautiful, sad brown eyes
Remember now, they only told you lies
Forget how he seemed so warm and true
Remember now, he wasn't true to you
Forget how his smile made your heart skip a beat
Remember now, it's his heart you can't keep
Forget his kisses as you passed in the hall
Remeber the hours alone waiting for his call
Love can be your best friend
And it can be your enemy too
So here's this little lesson
I'm gonna give to you
Keep it close to your heart
And keep it there forever
Try to remember to forget
But don't ever forget to remember

© Copyright 1999 Mya15 - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-07-19 01:34 AM


good advice, nicely done.

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*



murf1_00
Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 20

2 posted 1999-07-19 04:05 AM


Its hard to get over a relationship where u love someone and in the end u find that their love fer u was false. I've been in that situation myself and i must say u have caught the feeling here in ur poem. Keep up the good work and kepp the true pure feelin of love flowin through ur work.
katrina
Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 41
White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A
3 posted 1999-07-19 12:29 PM


I really like the message in your poem. Very nicely done and great poem!
jjsweets
Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 18
albion,MI,usa
4 posted 1999-07-19 01:19 PM


purely awesome!

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* s.w.e.e.t.s *

Danleigh3
New Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 5
florida/ny
5 posted 1999-07-19 07:51 PM


your peom was great- I absolutely Loved it. Keep being strong!
heaven_0401
Junior Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 19
Australia
6 posted 1999-07-19 10:26 PM


love this poem absoultey great
keep up the good work

neunagirl
New Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 7
Belton, MO U.S.A.
7 posted 1999-07-20 02:16 PM


I loved this poem. Great job on telling it like it is.
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