Teen Poetry #1 |
Remember to Forget |
Mya15 Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 16Sunrise,Fl,33351 |
Forget his face, forget his kiss, For get his touch, it won't be missed Forget the time you were together You know now it won't last forever Forget how he always made you glad Remember now, you're the girl he once had Forget his gentle, teasing way Remember you didn't like that anyway Forget the way he spoke your name Remember now, things aren't the same Forget that he said your love love was for sure Remember now that he's loving her Forget how the time flew by so fast Remember it's over now, it's in the past Forget that he said it was you he treasured Remember now, he's gone forever Forget his beautiful, sad brown eyes Remember now, they only told you lies Forget how he seemed so warm and true Remember now, he wasn't true to you Forget how his smile made your heart skip a beat Remember now, it's his heart you can't keep Forget his kisses as you passed in the hall Remeber the hours alone waiting for his call Love can be your best friend And it can be your enemy too So here's this little lesson I'm gonna give to you Keep it close to your heart And keep it there forever Try to remember to forget But don't ever forget to remember |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
good advice, nicely done. ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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murf1_00 Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 20 |
Its hard to get over a relationship where u love someone and in the end u find that their love fer u was false. I've been in that situation myself and i must say u have caught the feeling here in ur poem. Keep up the good work and kepp the true pure feelin of love flowin through ur work. |
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katrina Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 41White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A |
I really like the message in your poem. Very nicely done and great poem! |
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jjsweets Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 18albion,MI,usa |
purely awesome! ------------------ * s.w.e.e.t.s * |
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Danleigh3 New Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 5florida/ny |
your peom was great- I absolutely Loved it. Keep being strong! |
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heaven_0401 Junior Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 19Australia |
love this poem absoultey great keep up the good work |
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neunagirl New Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 7Belton, MO U.S.A. |
I loved this poem. Great job on telling it like it is. |
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