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since 1999-07-18
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0 posted 1999-07-19 12:07 PM

we touch like shock waves and soar,
wild streams of flowing with energy,
love moves throughout with grace,
with passion, whole and deep.
It doesnt take much to make you see
what a touch alone can bring
just a hand, but never so much,
it is like pure water: true to the touch.
A Picasso painting so lost and shifting,
love is the same, so lost and confused. Like a babys breath on you skin
a sweet, sensible hush,
So is the wondorous meaning of a touch...
sometimes can mean more than a kiss
So slow and innocent - the same
can be passed by holding a hand.
Oh the feeling i feel for those
who have not expierienced
The touch...oh how they miss...

* s.w.e.e.t.s *

© Copyright 1999 jjsweets - All Rights Reserved
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since 1999-07-17
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Oak Grove
1 posted 1999-07-19 12:36 PM

that was a wonderful way to show how just a single touch can mean so much.
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
2 posted 1999-07-19 12:55 PM

Wonderful...a touch can mean so much, especially from one you love so much. Excellent piece.

..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson

*Krista Knutson*

[This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 07-19-99).]

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