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xave
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 5
Camp Lejeune, NC, USA

0 posted 1999-06-18 12:07 PM


Like Bath-Water - by Ryan Schellenberg

My mind smelled of antiseptic roses
and chewed-up gummy worms
Cherry-flavored spoonful overdoses
and bike-ride locust-swarms
Afternoons in a golden sun
where bodies grew by years
Leaves fell one by one
and prayers of faith swallowed all my fears

Soon after though, I felt it grow
like a tree rooted in my chest
If I thought I’d reap what I had sown
I would’ve tried better, I would’ve been best

But now I cloud of cigarettes and dirty dancers
stolen children’s toys
Malignant cancers
I’ve lost those friends with familiar voices
Stop!
They’ve taken something small from my large and heaping stack
Of things that I’ve held close
I’m not quite sure what it was, but I need it back
to change the way my life goes

I fear that the way the water feels
is surely the way it is
Was yesteryear, or is this one real?
I want back the things I thought I’d never miss

© Copyright 1999 xave - All Rights Reserved
Raven
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since 1999-06-14
Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA
1 posted 1999-06-20 02:38 PM


How true your poem is, so often we want back what we so easily left behind...although we can never again have yesterday, the memories will forever remain.


~Raven~

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