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Teen Poetry #1

Love and Traveling

Iceman
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 11
E-falmouth, Ma, Falmouth

0 posted 1999-07-15 11:08 AM

Love and traveling
having and then not having
you begin to love
then you are being shoved
right out of your loves life
with a feeling of a heart pierced by a knife

You come and go
like a one time show
never staying in one place
no one remembering your face
living with a faimly who does not care
Do i begin to Love? Do i dare?
Knowing within a week
that my life with her could only be a wink
a wink time
so short a time
No i do not dare fall in love
to have my thoughts free as a dove
I will hold tight
knowing if i do there will be no fight

NO LOVE AND TRAVELING
DO NOT
FIT

FUBU
New Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 4
falmouth

1 posted 1999-07-16 09:07 AM

Iceman I like some of your poems but this one is way too mushey, I thought that you were a tough guy but I guess that I was wrong.

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