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heaven_0401 Junior Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 19Australia |
I've never felt this bad before This sad, this low this lonely Emptiness strangles me Choking me beyond properation I cry so hard every night But it still doesn't change a thing I still fell So alone Although lonliness somehow comforts me Or is it the confrontation Of letting someone get close That scares me i don't know All i know is that I don't want to be sad anymore I don't want to be so lonely That i find the only way Out is not to be in, in the first place Depression totally surrounds me Swallowing me at times The reality hits me My life will always be this way I am uncapable of being happy, well-adjusted I will be stuck on this shocking cruel roundabout of life Until i decide That its my step My turn to finally get out of all my misery To step of into the unknown To end it all |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
The raw emotion of this is staggering. I applaud your effort with this piece. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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FUBU New Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 4falmouth |
Ireally like your poem and I think that it is one of the greatest I have ever read |
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TIAJAH1434EVER New Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 5FALMOUTH,MA. 02536 |
I really lyike all of the poems that you have written. Seriously I have gonthru almost the whole thing to find your poems. your such a good poet. Maybe I should take lessons! ------------------ Never let anything get in the way of true love.-Tiajah- |
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