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heaven_0401
Junior Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 19
Australia

0 posted 1999-07-15 04:25 AM


I've never felt this bad before
This sad, this low this lonely

Emptiness strangles me
Choking me beyond properation
I cry so hard every night
But it still doesn't change a thing
I still fell
So alone

Although lonliness somehow comforts me
Or is it the confrontation
Of letting someone get close
That scares me

i don't know
All i know is that
I don't want to be sad anymore
I don't want to be so lonely
That i find the only way
Out is not to be in, in the first place

Depression totally surrounds me
Swallowing me at times

The reality hits me
My life will always be this way
I am uncapable of being happy,
well-adjusted

I will be stuck on this shocking
cruel roundabout of life

Until i decide
That its my step
My turn to finally get out of all my misery

To step of into the unknown
To end it all

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DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-15 07:26 AM


The raw emotion of this is staggering. I applaud your effort with this piece.

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FUBU
New Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 4
falmouth
2 posted 1999-07-16 09:11 AM


Ireally like your poem and I think that it is one of the greatest I have ever read
TIAJAH1434EVER
New Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 5
FALMOUTH,MA. 02536
3 posted 1999-07-16 11:04 AM


I really lyike all of the poems that you have written. Seriously I have gonthru almost the whole thing to find your poems. your such a good poet. Maybe I should take lessons!


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Never let anything get in the way of true love.-Tiajah-


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