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Krystal Klear
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 7
Phoenix Arizona USA

0 posted 1999-06-16 10:36 PM


I love you
I hate you
I need you
I detest you
I chase you
I leave you
I think of you
I dream of you
I want you
I cry because of you
I smile because of you
I saw things in a new perspective because of you
I saw pain because of you

But through all these things I felt with you,
THrough pain and heartache...
I found true love with you.

© Copyright 1999 Krystal Klear - All Rights Reserved
Augchic711
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since 1999-06-17
Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA
1 posted 1999-06-19 01:24 AM


Krystal~
I have read a few of your poems and really think you have a wonderful talent! Me and my best-friend are reading with you and shared the EXACT same feelings to a tee! They say life's a bitch but i think love seems to me the mother of all! Thank you for sharing the feelings that so many people do!

*******augchic711*******

theduck52
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2

2 posted 1999-06-24 01:11 AM


hey krystal- Great poem, this was deep, i'm serious. It seems more like a short song. You REALLY have a talent here, be sure to write poems.
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