Teen Poetry #1 |
love train |
brockglaze Junior Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 21Muncie,Indiana,USA |
This poem is entitled "My Love for You" A powerful locomotive Careening headlong Down silver straight And endless tracks Hot roaring furnace Strong rumbling engine Cotton clouds of steam Billowing from the stack. ------------------ Brock J. Glaze |
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alisanichols New Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 5Daleville, Indiana |
this has to be one of the best poems ive ever read, you should publish your work! that is beautiful, but may i ask who you wrote this poem for? great job! Alisa |
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brockglaze Junior Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 21Muncie,Indiana,USA |
yes, Alisa, i wrote this poem for my girlfriend of 2 years... she has inspired all of my poetry, i love her so much! by the way, thanx for all the compliments on my poems! ------------------ Brock J. Glaze |
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alisanichols New Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 5Daleville, Indiana |
your welcome! you deserve them, you are truly an artist! Alisa |
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