Teen Poetry #1 |
hippos |
mistah v-dog Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 20falmouth, massachussetts,U.S. |
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habeebpetersen@hotmail Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 28falmouth MA usa |
i liked your poem because it had alot of words and good symetry |
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brockglaze Junior Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 21Muncie,Indiana,USA |
i also thought this poem was well written, its sad, but it gets right to the point. good work! and your right hippos are grey... |
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