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A storm of lost love...

brockglaze
Junior Member

since 1999-07-13

Posts 21
Muncie,Indiana,USA

0 posted 1999-07-13 08:47 AM

This poem was written after I had lost the girl who was the reason I got up every morning.
Storm

A storm of lost love, it came out tonight.
Pouring its rain of pain to make me cry
Oh please darkness leave and let in the light
Hold your demolition up in the sky.
Dear God, why must i always be so sad?
Life, a tear drop in an endless ocean
Good times are near, must i dwell on the bad
Death to me now seems a sweet salvation.
In these long nights, i've lost my will to live
If im not hurting, im in a blind rage
I am empty, there's nothing left to give
This book of life's got me stuck on one page.
I look to the heavens to help me cope
With my hands raised to the sky, is there hope?

please reply and tell me what you think of this poem... thanks alot!

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Brock J. Glaze

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-07-13 03:31 PM

I really like this, brockglaze. Wonderful descriptions. Keep up the good work!

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*Krista Knutson*

alisanichols
New Member

since 1999-07-14

Posts 5
Daleville, Indiana

2 posted 1999-07-14 01:24 PM

great descriptions, thats so sad, it makes me want to cry! nice work, nice imagery!

Alisa

mandas_1
New Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 5
Irving,TX. USA

3 posted 1999-07-15 02:43 PM

nice work! i really like it! I can relate to it. If you have anything else you should submit it! (or send it to me: [email protected])

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