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RaiN J. CaSteeL
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0 posted 1999-06-16 09:17 PM

i dont know if this is good...but here it goes

She Sighed Softly....

As the fire flickered
And the clock chimed 7
She sighed softly
As he became her
For a while they laid
Capturing the moment
Their souls merging
As if it were their last
Time together...
The without a sound
He moved softly
Time ceased to exist
As his movements
Became more demanding
And yet still gentle
His eyes glued to hers
His thoughts flowing into her
"I love you"
Said mutually inside
Yet held back...
And then let out
She moaned...
It was as if there was no room
No light outside
As if the world broke away
And left them
There to stay...
She floated higher
Grasping his shoulders
She felt his shivers...
And finally breathing in heaven
And exhaling pleasure
They felt release....
Hearts rapidly beating
Their souls
Dancing happily....

As the fire flickered
The clock chimed 8
She sighed softly
And he became her....

Rain J. Casteel

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the wonderful land of oz
1 posted 2002-11-01 03:12 AM

no wonder you're no longer around.

i don't know how long i would last if i had any zeros.


i had a post with only one reply and i was pissed.  i reposted three weeks later.


too bad you had to leave.



what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (11-01-2002 03:13 AM).]

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